Instead we get pages and pages of Rarity saying stuck up things and Charity copying her and then they worry about dresses. Have her kidnap or magically change Rarity's look into someone else so that Rarity has to try and get people to see who she really is. Have the Jennifer Jason Leigh moment of her copying Rarity's mane happen in the middle of the book, not at the end. Make Charity a villain instead of just a groupie. Something like THAT would have made this more dangerous and appealing.

But there the character tried to take over Rigby's life by magically morphing into him. I've also seen a version of this on Regular Show.

This is basically a concept like the movie Single White Female. Sure she can be embarrassed about other people's reactions but when alone she still does nothing. Rarity not only notices this but keeps ignoring it. You realize that in the first chapter you see her because they not only show it but they say it. The plot of this book is that Rarity's apprentice thinks Rarity is the greatest and tries to be like her. What is very good about this whole series is that the books advance the characters a little in life and give them more responsibilities. I DO like that Rarity is getting a student and is actually a teacher now. Sound familiar? Well it's basically every Rarity plot of the first two seasons. This one is Rarity having an apprentice and she is also worried about finishing a new line of dresses for a show. That one was a page-turner with high stakes and exciting things happening. Quite different from GM Berrow's other MLP works like Twilight and the autumn books. The only thing CLOSE to anything actually happening in it doesn't really come for about 9 chapters.

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